Example of what not to do

This is taken from someone's actual profile. I added nothing to this and I hope if I break it down people will learn what not to do first hand. 

OK WHERE DO i BEGiN....UMM MY DAD PAST AWAY VERY RECENT ON OCT 10 OF 2009 SO THiNGS HAVE BEEN REALLY HARD ON ME . I feel for her, but this may be a little too personal

....i AM AND WiLL ALWAYS BE A DADDYS GiRL....iM VERY iNTELLiGENT WHEN i WANNA B AND ONE DAY i WiLL BE A DOCTOR. When you want to be? You should be smart. Period, and anyone reading this would take it she isn't with the way she's typed this out.

....i STAND HIGH CUZ iM VERY CONFiDENT Nothing wrong with being confident and standing up for what you believe in, but if you have to 'announce' it then it may seem as though you aren't as confident as you appear....i GET WAT i WANT WHEN i WANT BECUZ i KNO HOW TO DO SO Would anyone else assume she's spoiled by this statement?.....i BELiEVE iN MYSELF.....i DONT GiVE A FUK ABOUT WAT HE OR SHE THiNKS OR SAYS......FUK WAT U HEARD && RECOGNiZE WAT U SEE..... .What is this Compton? 

.iM VERY HONEST AND YES SUMTiMES MY TRUTH WiLL HURT...i DONT HOLD BACK ON ANYTHiN. What this really means: "I'm a bitch"

 ..iM THE OLDEST WiTH A YOUNGER SiS AND A BABY BRO WHOM i LOVE DEARLY......MY DAD HAS TAUGHT ME TO BE ALOT iN LiFE AND ii THiNK ABT AND MiSS HiM MORE THAN N E THiNG!....MY MOM KOO AS FUK... *Cool & maybe you should keep the F- word out of it

.UMM i LiKE TO CHiLL AND HAVE A FUN ASS TiME!! YOU NEVER WNNA PiSS ME OFF OR i WiLL AND CAN B DA BiGEST **** EVER.....BUT OTHER THEN THAT iM REAL KOO...JUSs HiT ME UPP Aii HOLLA* No comment, that's how bad it is haha.

 

First of all, DO NOT TYPE LIKE THIS, if you're like me, I use caps as a way to show emotion, when I read someone's profile and they wrote in all caps, in my head they're screaming at me. That's not good. Also the mix and match of lower case and whatever else is wrong with this makes her come across as immature and contrary to what she said, she does not seem intelligent. Sometimes or other wise.

The other thing is, imagine the kind of guy she's attracting? Then again, maybe she likes that kind of guy who knows.

Again, I can't stop you from doing what you want, but if you're really interested in finding or dating someone offline I just wanna help you out some. This girl can do what she wants, and if she's like that in real life, props to her for being realll honest.